- Again, the poetry in this story is important.
- I really liked the exchange between the buck and doe in the south woods.
- The looming fate of the hunter is such an integral part of the story.
- I think I would like to include similar foreshadowing in the retelling.
- I like the dialogue of the doe as she ponders death after the buck dies.
- I think the dynamic between the buck, doe, and hunter is very interesting.
- There is a lot of self doubt and anguish associated with the dynamic.
- This would be something cool to manipulate or recreate in the retelling.
- Mirshikari is a very confident man and did not understand the weight of his actions.
- Raja Rasalu is very wise and knowledgable.
- It seems that Raja associates himself with others as entertainment.
- He constantly uses riddles as a way of messing with mortal men.
- I think he is very clever and his cleverness is a reoccurring theme in each story.
- The king is unable to solve Raja's riddle and seeks confirmation of the hunter's death.
- There were many who doubted the death of Mirshikari. I believe this is a testament to his strength. This only reinforces the fact that Raja is so far beyond the strength of other men.
- The story ends by Raja alluding to another king.
- I could possibly transition into the next story.
I think that there is a lot of value in the first story. It spans across four different sections and includes much detail and thought. I can do a lot with this story. There is a lot of possibility for change. I could also focus on one specific section and retell it in my own fashion.
(This is a photo of deer in the Sukhna Wildlife Sanctuary in India. This is how I imagined the deer in the story would look. Source: Wikimedia Commons)
Bibliography: Raja Rasalu from The Adventures of the Punjab Hero Raja Rasalu by Charles Swynnerton. Source: UnTextbook
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