Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts

Thursday, October 5, 2017

Week 7 Story: Trip to the Nether

You can find the updated version of the story here.


I awoke from my dream in a mysterious place filled with the stench of death. There were souls wondering the plagued ground and they were searching for someone to smother and take their life. However, I did not fear such incompetent creatures. "I am the Venerable Sun Wu Kung!" I yelled this as I walked past the creatures. I did not and I will never fear such foul creatures. I am Heaven's equal, and I did not forget that I was the chosen one to lead my people. So, I ventured forward into the pitch-black night and stopped when I came upon the gates to a very large and ominous city.

I soon realized where I had wondered. The guards at the gate informed me that I was now in the realm of death known as the Nether World. However, it did not take the words of the guards for me to realize I had been led to the realm of the forsaken and dead. I pulled out my staff and lengthened it to ten feet. The guards were frightened by this act of aggression, and I did not hesitate. I quickly struck down the guards and gained entrance to the city.

I stormed through the city without regard for the patrons. "I am the Venerable Sun Wu Kung!" I yelled this through the streets as I was searching for those foolish enough to bring me to such a disgraceful place. I was met by a party of 10 men and their bodyguards. They claimed to be the ten princes of the Nether Realm. I was not amused with their titles. "You are no princes! You are weak and feeble spirits, and I will not take orders from you fools!" I yelled this at the princes as they clamored backwards in fear. I ordered them to bow in my presence. They were very quick to oblige to my demands and knelt before my feet. They were scared, and I planned to take full advantage of my position of power.

The princes spent some time trying to appease me. They were afraid that I would bring harm to them and their people. I knew what I was fully capable of doing, so I showed them mercy. "Bring me the Book of Life and no harm shall come to you!" I yelled at them to do so with urgency. They did not hesitate in bringing me the book. I thumbed through the pages until I came across my name and the name of my people. Once I found the names I marked through the day of our predetermined deaths. I freed my people of any fate that was going to become of them.

However, I knew that there was still more to achieve on earth and in the heavens. So, I quickly made my way out of the city and awoke from my dream. I was back with my people on earth. I told them of the good news and my astoundingly easy victory. We celebrated with a giant banquet that night. I had secured the lives of my people, and we all knew it was a great time to rejoice.




(A photo of the venerable Sun Wu Kung. Source: Wikimedia Commons)

Author's Note: The story that I retold was sourced from The Monkey King Unit. The Monkey King, Sun Wu Kung, is a popular figure from Chinese folklore. Sun Wu Kung was born as a stone ape. He possessed the powers of both the earth and the heavens. His birth place was high on a mountain top, and the mountain had taken in powers from all of the elements. This gave him his natural abilities and powers that far exceeded those of any man. Sun learned the secrets to immortality during his travels. He possessed the ability to shape-shift and walk amongst the clouds. The specific account I retold came from Sun's adventure to the Nether World. I kept most of the details of the story fairly similar. I told my version in first-person. I felt that this makes a more detailed and engaging story than the traditional third-person perspective. I also changed a few small details here and there to add some variety to the story and put my own mark on the retelling.

Bibliography: "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" from The Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhelm and translation by Frederick H. Martens. Source: UnTextbook

Wednesday, October 4, 2017

Reading Notes: The Monkey King, Part B

I continued my readings today with the Monkey King Unit. I think that the second half of the unit presents a lot of more intense conflict and resolution. I was really excited to dive into the stories and find out what becomes of the Monkey King and his people.


  • As I suspected Sun Wu Kung was called to the heavens
  • It seems that Sun is letting his guard down too much
  • He assumes that he is indestructible and not bound to the rules of life
  • Sun definitely proved himself to be an equal to the heavens
  • I did not suspect Sun to better the warriors of the heavens, but it did not surprise me
  • Sun becomes very ignorant and complacent once he has achieved heavenly status
  • He does not take into account the effects his actions have on others
  • I think this is a very important character flaw
  • Sun's inability to see what is best for others constantly causes issues
  • Sun Wu Kung loses control of his desires and emotions
  • Sun wages war on the heavens and does not seem to have a reason for doing so
  • It seems that Sun's only amusement in life is besting others
  • Sun constantly searches for a new challenge and is never satisfied with what he has
  • This is another character flaw that is vital to the development of the story
  • I really like the fact that Sun constantly causes conflict
  • Sun's inability to law low is what makes the stories engaging
  • It really seemed that Sun's defeat was of his own ignorance
  • He became tame once Buddha arrived and humbled him
  • I think Sun could have achieved so much if he had just realized his impolite manner
Overall, I really enjoyed reading about Sun and his adventures. I think I will probably retell one of his adventures or great battles. There was a lot that took place in this unit, so I definitely have a lot of options with this week's story.

(A cool photo of an ice sculpture of the Monkey King. Source: Wikimedia Commons)

Bibliography: "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" from The Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhelm and translation by Frederick H. Martens. Source: UnTextbook

Tuesday, October 3, 2017

Reading Notes: The Monkey King, Part A

This week I read the the unit of The Monkey King "Sun Wu Kung". The Monkey King is a very popular hero in Chinese culture. The Monkey King is so popular that he even makes appearances in various video games. I really liked reading about the legend of the Monkey King. I had always heard of him, but I never knew the actual origin story. I have been looking forward to reading this unit for a few weeks.


  • Born of a magic egg on a mountain top
  • He possessed the magic of the earth and the heavens
  • He was the stone ape before becoming the King of the Apes
  • The Monkey King was a very curious individual
  • He was always pondering thought and considering the deeper meanings to life
  • The Monkey King attains his name Sun Wu Kung from his master, the "Discerner"
  • It seems that Sun is always over-eager to obtain answers
  • Sun is always curious and seeks the truth, but at times he can become very eager
  • Sun Wu Kung was always after the blessing of immortality
  • He was so clever that he was able to obtain the means to immortality
  • The gifts and abilities that Sun Wu Kung possess and learn are something of imagination
  • I really like the emphasis that is placed on Sun's drive to obtain immortality
  • I also like the pure talent that Sun possesses
  • It seems that Sun's ability to understand the unordinary is what makes him so special
  • Sun is very brave and courageous when it comes to saving his people
  • His ability to transform himself by using a single piece of hair is remarkable
  • I like the fact that the story constantly progresses to new events
  • The story of the Dragon King is particularly interesting and shows the true might of Sun Wu Kong
  • The venture to the Nether World sets up the second part of the reading
I am really excited for the second part of the reading. I think Sun's actions in the Nether World could be a cause for possible conflict in the future. It seems that the story continues to foreshadow events that will take place in the heavens. I am very excited to see what becomes of Sun Wu Kung once he is confronted by the Gods. There is a lot of originality in this story, and I want to give an accurate retelling.

(A cosplay of The Monkey King Sun Wu Kung. Source: Wikimedia Commons)

Bibliography: "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" from The Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhelm and translation by Frederick H. Martens. Source: UnTextbook