- The story is very good at creating an eerie atmosphere
- You can tell from the beginning that the hut belongs to the cannibal goblin
- The description of the hut and its inhabitant creates an uneasy feeling
- I really liked the thoughts of the traveler being included
- The author does a good job of giving the reader the emotions of the traveler
- I was hoping to see the traveler doze off as he stayed in the hut
- I thought it was funny how the goblin made such a point to not wander to the back side of the room
- This only invoked curiosity for the traveler
- The room of bones was filled with this ominous and revolting presence
- I appreciated the amount of detail put into that scene
- The emphasis on the traveler's religion was interesting
- That seems to be a light theme of the story
- I liked how the goblin transformed during the escape scene
- This ensured that the true nature of the beast came to light
- I would like to expand on this story
- I think there could be an altered ending or a continuation of the story
- It was pleasing to see that the rumors of the old goblin woman were actually true
- I could write a story about people confronting the goblin once and for all
- That would have a very climatic ending
(A photo of an old goblin woman. Source: Max Pixel)
Bibliography: The Adventures of Kintaro, The Golden Boy from Japanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki. Source: UnTextbook
Hey Jake. I decided to comment on here because I like the style that you use for your reading notes. They are a lot smaller and concise but you can tell that this is an effective way for you to improve your writing. I would like to resemble it because sometimes mine are just paragraphs but I think the bullet points would make it easier for me to review.
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